persuasive writing

 Pembroke street

otago  (oamaru)
9400
New zealand


I hope today I'll convince you why you should consider the organisation of an OIS motorsports team. Well, let me start off with a few key reasons.

It boosts the schools lists in sports and attracts a whole different audience to consider enrolling into ois, almost all high achieving intermediate schools have a motorsports team or something similar. And i'm more than certain there are enough people at this school that ride a dirtbike of some sort or even do motocross to form a team to compete in competitions in the otago region..

It brings recognition to our school in a new range of people, and it gives students who don't necessarily like rugby, football, basketball, a chance to compete and give ois a name. And it could be as simple as meet up at a spot and have an ois outdoor tent to rest at while we compete.

They are not as dangerous as it seems, it's  almost like horse racing, same risks include falling off at high speed, crashing, or hitting an object. But with a dirtbike you have more control over speed and braking.  Furthermore I think it would be a great bonding experience for ois students and a way to make new friends over a hobby they all enjoy..

Thanks for reading
-luke barker

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